Poppies by Weir Flashcards
opening
‘three days before armistice sunday’
-This use of temporal deixis establishes the theme of remembrance from the start.
memory
‘I pinned one onto your lapel.. spasms of paper red …yellow bias binding around your blazer.
-This use of asyndetic listing shows how detailed the memory is to the narrator to show its significance and how dear it is to her
-spasms of paper red may show the pain felt by the family and soldiers
-yellow bias may be the image of an innocent life (son) being blocked out by death which suggests the war stopped him from living his life
nose
‘I wanted to graze my nose across the tip of your nose’
-The word choice implies that the memory also has painful undertones
-highlights the memory of when he was little
impluse
‘I resisted the impulse to run my fingers through the gelled blackthorns of you hair’
-words impulse and resisted shows her craving and desire to relive these moments which enhances the emotional impact of the poem
-blackthorns may represent an innocent sacrificial figure
brave
‘I was brave’
-mother put her feelings aside for the sake of her country which shows her patriotic feelings towards her country
world
‘the world overflowing like a treasure chest’
-This simile creates an image of there being an outpouring of emotion by the narrator
-caesura after it to indicate she stopped speaking
-represents the child is excited for the adventure ,journey and treasures of the world
sickness
‘my stomach busy making tucks, darts, pleats’
-the metaphor and asyndetic listing shows how she feels guilty and sick
-trying to keep herself busy so she can keeps her mind off the grief
lack of control
‘leaned against it like a wishbone’
-using it for support as she cant carry herself as her emotions make it difficult to stand straight
-simile of wishbone shows that after seeing the grave she desires and longing to have her son back which indicates her desperation and craving
last line
‘I listened, hoping to hear your playground voice catching on the wind.’
-poignant ending with a very sad metaphor
-she wants to hear him one last time and she wants to believe he will come back