poppies Flashcards
i was brave…
what technique?
as i walked with you to the front door,the world overflowing like a treasure chest.
metaphore implies all her emotions are pouring.
i listened hoping to hear….
your playground voice catching on the wind
a split second you were….
away,intoxicated
spasms of paper…
red
personification of paper
suggest she is considering the possible death of her son
i wanted to graze my nose….
what technique?
across the tip of your nose ,play at being eskimos like we did when you were little.
sensory image
i resisted the impulse to run my…
fingers through the gelled blackthorns of your hair
released a song…
bird from its cage.
trying to accept her sons want for freedom
later a single dove…
flew from the pear tree