Poppies Flashcards
“Three days before Armistice Sunday
and poppies had already been placed”
The mention of Armistice Sunday and use of reported speech alerts readers to the poem’s themes of conflict and remembrance.
“on individual war graves. Before you left,
I pinned one onto your lapel, crimped petals.”
- Weir vividly describes the intimate act of a mother pinning a poppy on her son’s lapel, highlighting the personal sacrifice made by families in war.
- The intimacy of tone is reflected in the use of “I” and “you” pronouns, highlighting how war affects individuals.
“Sellotape bandaged around my hand,
I rounded up as many white cat hairs
as I could …”
Mundane details like cat hairs on clothing convey a sense of familiarity, enhancing the poignancy of the speaker’s grief and memories.
“Upturned collar, steeled the softening of my face.
I wanted to graze my nose across the tip of your nose.”
- Weir portrays the mother’s struggle to contain her emotions with intimate detail.
- The oxymoron “Steeled the softening” suggests a poignant internal conflict, subverting typical ideas of bravery in war.
“to run my fingers through the gelled
blackthorns of your hair. All my words
flattened, rolled, turned into felt,”
- The tactile imagery of grooming highlights the loss of physical connection.
- Weir’s metaphor of words becoming felt symbolises the depth of the parent’s grief and their struggle to articulate it.
“After you’d gone I went into your bedroom,
released a song bird from its cage.”
- Weir employs metaphor, with the release of a bird symbolising the son’s departure.
- This signifies the parent’s act of letting go and the journey towards acceptance.
“skirting the church yard walls, my stomach busy
making tucks, darts, pleats,…”
The repeated reference to clothes-making links parenthood to the formation of something new, but with the use of “tucks”, “darts” and “pleats” suggesting containment, echoing the repressed grief the mother feels.
“On reaching the top of the hill I traced
the inscriptions on the war memorial,
leaned against it like a wishbone.”
- Weir uses sensory imagery to evoke the experience of visiting the graveyard.
- The comparison to a wishbone conveys the parent’s fragility in their grief-stricken state (and seems ironic as a traditional symbol of luck).
The dove pulled freely against the sky,
an ornamental stitch, I listened, hoping to hear
your playground voice …”
- The speaker uses the image of a dove and of a stitch coming loose to symbolise feelings of loss and frustration.
- The speaker is stuck in the past and unable to resolve their grief, still listening for their voice on the wind.
“…without
a winter coat or reinforcements of scarf, gloves.”
- Weir juxtaposes domestic imagery with military terms, emphasising the lack of comfort and support felt by the parent.
- This highlights the sacrifice made by families in times of conflict.