Poetry Flashcards
‘The Captain of the 1964 Top of the Form Team’
- definite article ‘the’= specifically one
- concrete noun ‘captain’= leader, in charge, most popular/intelligent; natural selection means he’s at the top of the hierarchy
- ‘1964’= temporal deixis, specifies period of time
‘Gargling with Vimto’
(Captain)
- onomatopoeia ‘gargling’= present tense, brings memories to the present
- proper noun ‘Vimto’= represents innocence and youth
- enjambment= no pause in train of thought
‘The clever smell of my satchel. ‘
(Captain)
- possessive pronoun ‘my’= egotistical?
- caesura= pauses represent stream of consciousness and how quickly the thoughts are coming to him
- personification of ‘clever smell’= narrator exudes intelligence
‘the white sleeve of my shirt saluted again and again’
(Captain)
- repetition of frequency adverb ‘again’= he always knows the answers; too good for current life?, very confident, answers don’t change unlike everything around him
- base adjective ‘white’= connotes innocence
- material verb ‘saluted’= military connotations
‘The blazer. The badge. The tie.’
(Captain)
- concrete nouns= seemingly insignificant details; wants to go back and is trying to remember everything as it was
- caesura= stream of conscience
‘I want it back.’
(Captain)
- volta= comparison between childhood and present
- sudden change in tone from hopeful excitement to regret
‘stale wife’, ‘thick kids’
(Captain)
- base adjective ‘stale’= believes he deserves a better life than the one he has
- base adjective ‘thick’= treats everyone as inferior and believes his superiority in childhood should have gotten him a better position in life
What are Duffy’s intentions?
(Captain)
Duffy writes to show how fast people grow up and how to make the most of childhood.
‘Those early mercenaries, it made them ill’
(Nostalgia)
- demonstrative pronoun ‘those’= particular group
- concrete noun ‘mercenaries’= a soldier that is paid to fight for a country they do not belong to
- pronoun ‘it’= not specifically saying ‘nostalgia’; sense of denial?
‘down down’
(Nostalgia)
- repetition suggests that the soldiers are becoming more and more depressed; implies the decline of their mental conditions
‘dull crude coins clenched’
(Nostalgia)
- consonance and dental alliteration
- alliteration of the percussive ‘c’ implies harsh negativity
- material verb ‘clenched’= suggests effort to keep hold of them; all they have left?
‘they pined, wept, grown men.’
(Nostalgia)
- juxtaposition= questions the masculinity of men; links to gender values and stereotypes
- plosives= intensifies the harshness the mercenaries face during the battle
‘the sad pipes’
(Nostalgia)
- grammatically isolated= creates melancholic tone
- base adjective ‘sad’= emphasises sombre tone
- heightens multi- sensory concept
‘head in his hands, crying at the workings of memory’
(Nostalgia)
- sense of despair
- material verb ‘crying’= adds to despair nostalgia is causing everyone
‘It was spring when one returned’
(Nostalgia)
- concrete noun ‘spring’= positive volta; spring symbolises new life/beginnings
- pronoun ‘one’= no specific names
‘same street’, ‘same sign’, ‘same bell’
(Nostalgia)
- repetition of base adjective ‘same’= emphasises how nothing is different, could show length of struggle
‘everything changed’
(Nostalgia)
- contrasts ‘same’; syntax; new life?
- material verb ‘changed’= emphasises how much harder life will now be to live for the mercenaries
What is the structure of Nostalgia?
The poem is told by a 3rd person omniscient narrator, although there are lots of characters throughout. The final stanza has 10 lines instead of 9, perhaps suggesting that order has been restored after returning from war.
‘I’m ten years away from the corner you laugh on’
(BYWM)
- temporal deixis= stanzas begin with a reminder of distance in time between mum and daughter
- adverb ‘away’= daughter is becoming mum?
- material verb ‘laugh’= connotes happiness
- preposition ‘on’= present tense creates vivid image
‘Marilyn.’
(BYWM)
- proper noun= Marilyn Monroe; figurehead of the 1950s; mother is a figurehead of her life?
- caesura= emphasises importance of name
‘whose small bites on your neck, sweetheart?’
(BYWM)
- concrete noun ‘bites’= connotations of lust and young love; represents mum’s past life that she’s not experiencing anymore?
- proper noun ‘sweetheart’= role reversal, daughter babying mother
‘stamping stars from the wrong pavement’
(BYWM)
- sibilance= creates musicality; links to mum dancing in the line before
- Hollywood Walk of Fame?= slight hint of the past in mum’s step but it’s the ‘wrong pavement’, which signifies the change of having kids; guilt from child?
‘where you sparkle and waltz and laugh before you were mine.’
(BYWM)
- syndetic list= repetition emphasises all the qualities she imagined her mum had
- cyclical structure= establishes possessive tone
- possessive pronoun ‘mine’= mother has little freedom from child?
- caesura= memory is final
- semantic field of happiness, glamour
What are the themes in Before You Were Mine?
- love/romance
- memories
- time
- identity
What is the form of Before You Were Mine?
- 4 stanzas with 5 lines= steady passing of time
What is the importance of the present and past in Before You Were Mine?
- set in the past but written in the present tense= tries to bring memory to life and is almost grieving a loss so is carrying it with her
- keeping memory alive in the present
‘If you think till it hurts’
(Beachcomber)
- pronoun ‘you’= 2nd person; narrator is speaking to someone
- mental verb ‘think’= suggests extreme concentration
- colloquial language ‘till’= conveys Duffy’s colloquial style; person finds it difficult to recall memories
‘How old are you now?’
(Beachcomber)
- interrogatives= suggest weakened memory
‘In her bucket, a starfish, seaweed, a dozen alarming crabs’
(Beachcomber)
- semantic field of seaside objects
- triplet= represents stereotypical objects you’d find at the beach
‘Don’t move.’
(Beachcomber)
- imperative= instruction to themself to try and recall memory?
‘You remember that cardigan, yes?
You remember that cardigan.’
(Beachcomber)
- adjacency pair= shows memories are coming back slowly
- rhetorical question= prompting themself to remember
- mental verb ‘remember’= memory
- declarative= fact
‘But this is as close as you get.’
(Beachcomber)
- volta
- conjunction ‘but’= stops the progress they’re making with the memory
What are the themes in Beachcomber?
- memory
- loneliness
- reflecting
- age
What is the structure of Beachcomber?
- graphically, the poem looks like a wave
- stream of consciousness style
‘Waking, with a dream of first love’
(First Love)
- material verb ‘waking’= new day?; new found feeling in first love
- abstract noun ‘dream’= surrealism associated with first love; emphasis on memory- these feelings are heightened and unattainable in real love
‘I speak your name, after a silence of years’
(First Love)
- material verb ‘speak’= memory is so vivid she speaks their name
- brings memory into the present and is experiencing the love again
- abstract noun ‘silence’= hasn’t said the name in years
’ in windows of a changing sky, in mirrors, my lover’s eyes’
(First Love)
- concrete noun ‘windows’= divide between inside and outside?
- pathetic fallacy ‘changing sky’= emphasises how long she will hold on to the love
- concrete noun ‘mirrors’= persona is a reflection of her first love?
- ‘my lover’s eyes’= comparison between current and past lover?