Poems-Exposure Flashcards
The Rhythm
The poem is made up of five-line stanzas.
–The form mirrors the repetitive and never-ending nature of war.
–It also mirrors the ongoing boredom and misery of the soldiers.
The ABBAC rhyme scheme is repeated, which reflects the monotony (sameness) of war.
–But the last line of each stanza creates an unsettling feel. This is possibly to mirror how destabilised and on edge, the soldiers feel waiting for the enemy to attack.
First Person Narrative
The poem is written in the first person. It has many collective, possessive pronouns, such as “we”, “us”, “our”.
This hints at the collective (group) suffering of the soldiers in WW1. It also encourages the reader to share in their pain.
“…But nothing happens”
Repetition of “but nothing happens” throughout the poem gives the readers a sense of the boredom caused by waiting.
It also hints at the pointlessness of war.
“Our brains ache in the merciless iced east winds that knive us”
Personification and sibilance.
The weather is personified to make it sound menacing and deadly. This also characterises the weather as the real enemy of the soldiers.
The sibilance here highlights the intensity of the pain and the brutality of the weather.
“Dawn massing in the east her melancholy army…”
“Dawn massing in the east her melancholy army / Attacks once more in ranks on shivering ranks of grey.”
Personification.
–Dawn, usually associated with ideas of light and hope is here hostile and brings even more suffering.
Colour imagery.
The colour imagery “grey” conveys ideas of despair and boredom.
Military vocabulary.
“Ranks” is a military term and is repeated, reminding the reader that the weather is the soldiers’ enemy.
“Less deadly than the air that shudders black with snow”
Nature is presented as more damaging and deadly than the bullets.
The contrasting images of “black” and “snow” are unsettling. They highlight the horror of being exposed to the elements.
They also highlight how close to death the soldiers are.
“Slowly, our ghosts drag home”
Metaphor.
This metaphor suggests that war has sucked all the life out of the soldiers and further reminds readers that they are on the brink of death.
“All their eyes are ice”
Metaphor.
This metaphor describes the extreme effects of the weather that have overcome the soldiers.
It also implies that the soldiers have lost their humanity and could suggest they are close to breaking point.
Comparisons-Power of Nature vs. Power of Man
Storm on The Island
The Prelude
Tissue
Effects/Reality of conflict
War Photographer.
Poppies.
Kamikaze.
Bayonet Charge.
Remains.
