Poem - Exposure Flashcards
Our brains ache
Stanza 1: Talking about the mental strain of war
Silence, sentries, whisper
Stanza 1: Sibilence
But nothing happens
Stanza 1: “But nothing happens” is referring to the war This is parallelism. However, throughout the poem, he suggests that the weather is always changing. This adds another difference between the war and nature.
Like a dull rumour of some other war
Stanza 2: The war doesn’t seem real
poignant misery of dawn
Stanza 3: Normally, dawn is a happy event, ‘singing birds’, but war makes it miserable. Also dawn is cyclical and repetitive, it always happens, like the war.
War lasts, rain soaks and clouds sag stormy
Stanza 3: This tricolon is about the weather and war that lasts. Weather is always happening, like this war.
Sudden successive flights of bullets
Stanza 4: Sibilence
Air that shudders
Stanza 4: Personification
We watch them [snowflakes]
Stanza 4: instead of fighting they watch the snowflakes. They don’t want to fight.
Flowing flakes that flock
Stanza 4: Alliteration
[The Snowflakes] renew
Stanza 4: the snowflakes can be renewed, unlike the lives lost during the fighting. This suggests nature is against war
The wind’s nonchalance
Stanza 4: nonchalance means uncaring. Could be about how the soldiers have a nonchalant attitude to the war
We watch them [snowflakes] wandering
Stanza 4: wandering = aimless. Parallelism with aimless war
[the snowflakes] come feeling for our face
Stanza 5: Nature can walk all over them, the soldiers are very weak comparably. Another suggestion that nature is against war.
Slowly our ghosts drag home
Stanza 6: Like they are forced to go home. A part of them have died out there and only their ghosts remain.