Odour of Chrysanthemums - D. H. Lawrence Flashcards
‘A woman drew back into the hedge’
Metaphor: nature offers protection
‘She stood insignificantly trapped between jolting black wagons and the hedge.’
Adverb: ‘insignificantly’. Shows the main focus of the town is business/coal and nature.
‘A large bony vine clutched at the house as if to claw it down.’
Characterises nature as possessive and powerful, overrunning houses. ‘Bony’ malnourished: sinister tone. House is captive.
‘Pit bank loomed up beyond the pond.’
Personifies pit bank: industry such a vital figure in the town’s people lives, same importance as a person.
‘Flames like red sores licking it’s ashy sides.’
Simile and personification. Painting a scene of work/industry to the reader.
‘Miners … passed like shadows diverging home’
Similie: workers so common within the town, blend in like a shadow. Adds slight mystery/tension.
‘She was a tall woman of imperious mien, handsome’
Adjective: imperious (impressive). Characterizes her as unusual, masculine, almost unapproachable.
‘Her smooth black hair was parted exactly.’
The character is shown to be meticulous over her looks.
‘Her face was calm and set.’
The character is in control of her emotions and physical manner.
‘It was chrysanthemums when I married him, and chrysanthemums when you were born and the first time they ever brought him home drunk he’d got brown chrysanthemums in his button-hole.’
Chrysanthemum motif throughout the text, added to here. The flowers are present at all the key events in her life.
‘She said, more gently.’
The character has the ability to adapt.
‘She silenced herself.’
Displaying to reader her great emotional control, and control of her physical manner.
‘Her anger wearied itself, lay down to rest, opening it’s eyes from time to time and steadily watching, it’s ears raised to listen.’
Personifies anger to stress to the reader the size of it.
‘Her heart burst with anger at their father.’
Metaphor/hyperbole: exaggerating to reader stress
Repetition of ‘trouble’ and ‘hope so’ in rambling speech made by Mrs Bates (senior). Unfinished sentence ‘I don’t know how it is…’
Unlike Elizabeth, Mrs Bates is not in control of her emotions or speech.