Marianne Apostolides Flashcards
Her Writing Journey
Started work on book on eating disorders
Was doing research at Barnes and Noble
Met someone by chance
Got a book deal, an editor and an agent
The message is…move to New York
Serendipity is a recurrent element in writers’ careers
Chance encounters are important
You need to be ready to make the most of that chance encounter
Her editor left Norton
Her book got orphaned
Her second book got rejected at least 25 times
Her agent dropped her
She expanded a short piece into a novella
That got picked up
And her career got underway again
Important Lesson
Setbacks are a feature of literary careers
First books don’t always lead to second books
Agents will drop you (or quit)
Publishers will lose interest in you
Very few people don’t face some kind of adversity after they have published a book
Every summit is another mountain (not really, but, also, yes)
Writing as Training
Wrote a series of short pieces
Tried to master a bunch of different things
Did this to build her chops
This is a very smart thing to do:
Set yourself writing challenges
Focus on strengthening and broadening your skills
Sometimes training exercises produce publishable work
Three way to integrate Ideas into Novels
Decontextualize them
Integrate them into dialogue
Focus on the bodily aspects of their language
Decontextualize Ideas
Take philosophical or scientific ideas/texts and put them in new contexts
Splice these ideas/texts into the narrative
This makes them strange
This gives them new meanings and valances
Text as collage
Integrate them into dialogue
Have characters explain ideas
Avoid characters becoming mouthpieces for the author
Give the dialogue stakes
Make the dialogue natural
Make them/their language bodily
Poetry is sensuous language (about sound, shape, sense)
The language of philosophy and the sciences is/can also be sensuous
Focus on the physical/bodily aspects of the language of ideas
Making dialogue Natural
Learn about your characters
Learn their rhythms
Learn their vocabularies
Focus on replicating the flow of conversation between two people
Remember that good dialogue is reminiscent of real speech but not a replica of real speech
Strategy
She relied on interruptions/interuptors for this book:
A waiter arriving at a table
A character watching a scene play out at another table while talking to their dinner companion
Etc.
Integrate context into the flow of dialogue
This makes dialogue feel grounded/located and natural
Experimenting with Formatting
She right justified “I love you” and other sentences in the book
Not only poetry can be open form
There is room to play with the formatting of prose