Liz lochhead Flashcards
Too ordinary to be nostalgia
Suggests that the mother is a prominent figure in her and she thinks about her a lot
Down on her hands and knees
Shows that she is hardworking and we feel sympathy for her because it’s on Hogmanay
Still giving it elbow grease
Suggests that the speaker admires her because she’s trying her best to make the house clean and tidy for New Years
Evidence of working class in “View of Scotland: Love Poem”
- Sockeyed salmon, normally tinned food isn’t appealing but she’s trying to display a good meal with what she can afford
- Vinolay suggests that she has cheap carpeting and that she can’t afford premium carpets
- The way she is cleaning shows the typical west Scotland middle class notion of being proud of the house
View of Scotland love poem
Pleasant tone
“Darling” shows that she’s close to her partner and loves him
“The Bells” shows that this is a time of celebration and hope in the people
“We didn’t know we were the happiness we wished each other”- literally they are each other’s happiness but it shows how much this relationship means to them.
“Wi as minny heads as days in the year” Scottish dialect adds humour and this is a typical Scottish prank played and adds a playful tone
Box Room
Difficult relationship with the mother
“She smiled” - could be seen as passive aggressive.
“She put me in my place” - pun and it shows that she feels disrespected by the mother
“Peace to unpack” she quotes the mother out of sarcasm feels the mother doesn’t care about her
“He brings a Friend” - capitalisation of friend shows that she doesn’t mean so much to her boyfriend that she doesn’t deserve the role she think she has
Change of mood: she loses confidence
“Peace to unpack but I found none”- she is restless in the room
“Spare room” - she feels that she doesn’t have a significant place in the boyfriends life she is superfluous
“Laugh it off in self defence”- she feels antagonised by the mother; threatened by the mother
“Persistent fear elbows me” her fear is tormenting her and she’s worried if her relationship will ever stay
Speaker feeling worthless and isolated
“Egg collection shatters me” - pun with the shattering shows her confidence in the relationship shattering but the eggs also represent the boyfriends past relationships.
“But where do I fit in the picture”- she is questioning the role she fills in the boyfriends life, she feels excluded
Revelation:
Terrifying nature of the bull
“Held my hand”- shows that the bull is terrifying and she needs protection from it
“They called him Bob” - irony that such a thing is given a simple name trying to hide it’s scary nature but doesn’t work
“Monster” - shows that the bull must be feared
“Merging with the darkness” - the idea that the bull camouflages himself in the dark, he could come out of anywhere which creates fear in the girls heart
Contrast of masculinity:
“Oblivious hens” - suggests that females are small and petite compared to the massive masculine bull
“Placidity of milk” - shows that women are calm and collected and do what they’re told
“Self contained… anarchy” contrast of masculinity and femininity, women can control themselves where men can’t they’re aggressive and let hell loose essentially.
Danger she encountered
Big boys- alliteration of harsh b sound shows the threat they pose to the speaker
Pluck wings off of butterflies- shows the anarchist nature of the boys they destroy everything beautiful.
Pigtails thumping on my back- the thumping reflects how fast her heart is beating and how frightened she is
The bargain
Establishing atmosphere
“Fast and high”- the rivers volume and speed suggests there is a threat.
“Twitch and fret” - suggests nervousness and a tense atmosphere
Mention of police could suggest dangerous criminal activity nearby
Change of mood in Stanza 2
She is unsure about the continuation of the relationship
She looks “back” at the history of the relationship but she also looks forward and isn’t sure if the relationship is gonna continue
Shift of mood again
Tense and uncertain to joyful
“Boy with the beautiful Bakelite lights” enjambment shows the boys excitement compared to the tension in The previous stanza
“Button hopping station hopping” the ing shows the grooviness and mimics the boys dancing
“Beautiful” contrasts to the ugly losers in the previous part
Fate of the relationship
Speaker is caught up in romance where her boyfriend is aloof
“Glint” shows a flicker of light therefore happiness and there isn’t much happiness there, shows that she’s desperate for a sign of affection.
“Glad eye” shows happiness therefore affection towards her boyfriend