Living Space (Imtiaz Dharker) Flashcards
CONTEXT (AO3)
written by Imtiaz Dharker
- born in Pakistan
- presents a typical dwelling in the slums of the Indian city of Mumbai
purpose
- presents the precariousness of such homes (raise awareness)
- also presents the miraculousness of life, seeing this living space as evidence of human resourcefulness and determination
STRUCTURE
- free verse (no rhythm or rhyme)
- three stanza - the lines of the poem cling together representing the living space itself and the way the dwelling place is held together
irregularity of the stanza lines - shows how the dwelling is made without any particular design. - middle stanza - visually demonstrates the cramped, squeezed conditions.
FORM
written in irregular form.
‘There are just not enough
straight lines.’
‘straight lines’ - SYMBOL of stability and support - since there are not enough, Imtiaz immediately presents the vulnerability and fragility of those living in slums.
creates a conversational tone to introduce the serious topic.
‘.’ - SHORT SENTENCE - abrupt tone to ‘hook’ the reader into the topic and call for change.
‘Beams
balance crookedly on supports
thrust off the vertical.’
‘Beams balance’ - ALLITERATION of ‘b’ - creates a plosives sound - to emphasise the rough nature of housing.
‘crookedly’ - ADVERB - shows the instability - (A03) Mumbai slums are at high risk of collapse.
‘Nails clutch at open seams.’
‘nails clutch’ - IMAGERY + PERSONIFICATION - shows the sheer desperation of the community - also shows how the beams are almost clutching together.
‘open seams’ - METAPHOR - of vulnerability and bareness
‘Into this rough frame,
someone has squeezed
a living space.’
small stanza of three lines
- visually demonstrates the cramped, squeezed conditions
‘and even dared to place
these eggs in a wire basket,’
‘eggs’ - METAPHOR + SYMBOL - of rebirth and hope
‘dared’ - VERB - courage and resilience
‘wire basket’ - METAPHOR - of prison and could represent how the community feels trapped and enclosed within the slums
‘The whole structure leans dangerously
towards the miraculous.’
longer line - imitates the protruding beam ‘leaning’.
‘white’
‘light’
‘bright’
‘white’ + ‘light’ + ‘bright’ - LEXICAL FIELD of light and purity - brings a sense of cohesion within the otherwise FREE VERSE poem - conveys a sense of hope and resilience within the community.