In The Snack Bar Flashcards
Cup capsizes
The poem opens with alliteration ‘cup capsizes’ the word choice of ‘capsizes’ is an early indication of the sense of helplessness that will come up throughout the poem.
It is this sudden noise that first attracts the poets attention
Clatter
The word ‘clatter’ further emphasises the noise of the cup when it is dropped
A few heads turn
The identification of ‘a few heads turn’ highlights that very few people noticed what was going on in this busy cafe, also maybe a comment on how we often fail to notice important things in society
Trying to get to his feet
Morgan begins to project the message of the poem here. The word ‘trying’ suggests that the old man is struggling to do the most simple of things to get on his feet
Low round stool fixed to the floor
Morgan’s description of the ‘low round stool fixed to the floor’ empathises the fact that the cafe is not designed to make life easy for the disabled. The fixed stool is difficult to move and get off
Levers
The word choice of ‘levers’ shows that everything the man does takes a huge amount of effort
His hands have no power
The expression ‘hands have no power’ likens him to a machine that is broken
Dismal hump
Personification is used here to explain the way the mans hunched back (the ‘dismal hump’) pushes him down physically and leaves him feeling upset and vulnerable
Stained beltless gaberdine
The poet builds a sense of revulsion at the man through the description of his dirty clothes and untidy appearance
Like a monstrous animal caught in a tent in some story
The simile used here compares the man to an ‘animal caught in a tent’ this makes him sound like a kind of circus attraction or a monster. The sense that he appeared ‘in some story’ makes him seen beyond our understanding. All of this adds to the sense he is like a monster
Face not seen
This is a powerful line. His face is not seen because it’s pointed downwards, yet it is also not seen because many choose not to see it
If he could see
The poet reveals further details of his disability suggesting that he is also blind
Once painted white
He carries a white stick has he is blind, but the fact that it is so scuffed and muddy suggests that nobody is looking after him or helping him
Long blind, hunchback born, half paralysed
The poet gives a list of the disabilities that affects the man, building to the fact that he is ‘half paralysed’ the list helps to empathise just how difficult his life must be
He stands
The structure here and the single line ‘he stands’ emphasises his determination despite the difficulties that he is faced with. There is a sense of defiance here