Hide and seek Flashcards
‘Call out. Call loud’
Throws reader into game
‘sacks in the tool shed smell like the seaside’
Sibilance- image of seaside
They’ll ‘never’ find you
Modal verb- great confidence
‘The floor is cold’
Discomfort
‘whispering’ ‘hushed’
Plotting against him- isolation
‘Prowling’
Zoomorphism- vulnerability
‘heard them sound so hushed’
Alliteration mirrors breathing- tension
‘Don’t breathe. Don’t move. Stay dumb. Hide’
Imperatives and short sentences- stillness
‘the cold bites through your coat’
Personification- growing discomfort
‘darkening garden’
Builds tension and increases sense of isolation
‘bushes hold their breath’
Personification- threatening/vunerability
‘But where are they who sought you?’
Question- uncertainty- contrasts with previous assured tone. Unanswered- emphasises loneliness