h is for hawk Flashcards
context
- father just dies
- bird help her with grief
‘dont want you going home with the wrong bird’
foreshadowing bc she almost does
he means wrong specific bird
she means wrong depending on her emotional connection with the birds
short sentences - another…concentration..causetion.’
- shes very focused
- very instense
- must get the right bird
- ver important to her
-builds up the anticipation and suspense - attention to detail
onomatopoeia and repetition of thump
- tension
- everything happening very slowly - build up of tension
- power and strngeth of the hawk
‘the air turned syrupy , slow, flecked with dust’
- metaphor
- growing power of bird
- atmosphere around the box is changing as the bird is being released
- upmost p[ower
- BUILD OF TENSION
- raises q abt what the bird is going to be like
long syndetic list once the bird has been released
- overwhelming
- shift from anticipation to awe
- sensory language - sound and movement
- tricolon - huge bird - different parts of bird
- repetition of enormous - she in awe
- pathetic fallacy - shange in mood - connection - sunlight = beauty and strength and power
‘primaries cutting the air, her feathers raised like scattered quills from a frecktful porpentine’
- cutting - violence - fear - strength / power
- simile - fighting back - agression
my heart jumps sideways
metaphor
- element of fear
- jumping - exited
section after line 20
- majesty - powerful, dignity, power
- she is a conjuring trick - mysterious/powerful/magical/not possible
- fallen angel - god-like power/ dark sinister??- tied up
- semantic field of light
- griffon - eagle and lion - power and fear
- reflects all the mixed emotions chaotic shes feeling internally
- short sentences - disjointed thoughts and head space
‘like a turkey in a butchershop’
- vulnerability
- tied down
- restricted
- human control\
- she has empathy for the hawk
describing the man as ‘perfectly calm’
- contrasts with her chaos of thoughts
- father figure
- nurturing
- SKILL
- care and controlling
i love this man - said by narrator
- she sees him as a father figure to the hawk
- could reflect her relationship with her father
- she can help this bird-like her father helped her when she was young and vulnerable and scared
short sentences after she finds out it wasn’t her hawk
- disjointed - difficult to process
- thought process - internal narrative
- disappointment
- mirros the beginning - you want the wrong bird
new hawk - ‘she was smokier and darker and much much bigger….”
- semantic field of darkness - contrasts with light on previous hawk
- wailed - contrasts with sounds of previous hawk
ellipsis …..
- confusion
- concern
- try to get out of it