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Where the dear family live (home).

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“A humpy on the riverbank. Clean and homely”

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Symmetry of Act One (home, resilence).

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Beginning with the “AFTERMATH” where they are “rebuilding after a flood has devastated their home”

  • “devastated”
  • “sodden”
  • “destroyed”

Ends with “WATERS RISING” and “THE FLOOD”

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Sacrifices - Dolly (home, family, authority).

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“rips” Dolly’s “magazines” yet Dolly “sighs, resigned” rather than “protest[ing]” she supports their survival even when it comes to giving up her cherished possessions.

G - “It’ll be alright”
D - “You always say that”

“Nan gives her granddaughter a hug” = underscores the reality that Nan Dear isn’t making these decisions to harm her loved ones by taking away the things they hold dear but rather to protect them from the world’s cruelty. (ensuring their survival)

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Colonisation + home + ___ business.

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Nan - “They forced us to leave. Forced us to leave Cummeragunja. Our home.”

D - “Who did?”

“But Nan doesn’t want to talk about that business and DOLLY knows it”

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Family hierarchy.

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Dolly and Gladys both say “Yes, Nan” or “Yes, Mum” showing their obedience.

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Gladys dreams of white culture.

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“curtsying” presents a “bouquet of flowers” to the queen. But “instead of being formal, the QUEEN pulls her in for a hug”

“lights come back to reality” “Gladys is holding a bunch of weeds.”

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Historical account of the queen’s visit.

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“THE QUEEN’S VISIT”
- Real “radio is heard featuring a description of the Queen’s 1954 Royal Tour of Australia”
- Used to immerse readers in the real setting during the time to enhance Harrison’s purpose of the play further.
- “the hessian they lined the roads with. The hessian I couldn’t get through and couldn’t even peek over.
- To “stop the likes of her seeing our humpies”

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Explain Jane Harrison’s purpose of the play.

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Harrison exposes Australian society as governed by misogyny as well as racism, resulting in a culture that produced relentless violence against Indigenous women such as Nan Dear, Ester, and Dolly. In their experiences of abuse, these women are denied autonomy over their own bodies, in two cases by white men.

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Gender roles and expectations.

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G - “If they’d given us better houses…But hessian! Like a bandaid over a sore”

G - “Oh, mum doesn’t it bother you?

N - “What good is it if I get het up? My job is to get food on the table”

G - “But decent housing, Mum-“

N - “Gladys, get off your high horse” “Anyway, it’s Papa Dear’s mission to make things better for the Aboriginal people”

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Who is the author of Rainbow’s End?

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Jane Harrison

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When was Rainbow’s End by Jane Harrison published?

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2007

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When/where is Rainbow’s End set?

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Set in the 1950s in the northern Victorian area of Shepparton and Mooroopna.

  • Rural Victoria
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Under the theme of Racism and Segregation explain Paternalism in Rainbow’s End.

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Paternalism, describes an infantilising view of Indigenous people as incapable of looking after themselves and thus needing the protection of white people or the government; we see this in the way the Aboriginal community in ‘Rainbow’s End’ is constantly surveilled by white authorities (such as the Inspector) and in the memories of Cummeragunja alluded to by Nan Dear, where the Aboriginal Protection Act of 1909 had placed the Aboriginal community under strict control with the excuse of ‘protecting’ and taking care of them. Errol’s desire to protect Dolly and give her a ‘better life’ may also be interpreted as a reflection of paternalistic attitudes, with the exchange meant to symbolise how paternalism takes away the agency of Indigenous people like Dolly.

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Under the theme of Racism and Segregation explain Assimilation in Rainbow’s End.

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The playwright also exposes the indignant and traumatic consequences of assimilation. The Rent Collector and Inspector are perhaps the most obvious embodiments of assimilationist values, and are both represented as threats to the Dears family; specifically, they always appear as a threat to the children (first Dolly, and then Dolly’s child), as the playwright alludes to the history of the Stolen Generation, one of the greatest consequences of assimilation policies between the 1800s-1970s. Gladys’ rhetorical question, “why do we have to prove we can live like whitefellas, before we get the same opportunities?,” further illustrates how assimilation forced Indigenous people to leave behind their culture to reap the scarce rewards offered by white Australian society.

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Under the theme of Racism and Segregation explain Segregation in Rainbow’s End.

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At the same time, Australian society continued to be highly segregated, something which Harrison focuses on through the experiences of Nan Dear, who is served last at the butcher, or through Errol and Dolly’s relationship, which Dolly “knows cannot work” (p. 55). The hessian fence also appears as a symbol of segregation, preventing the Queen from seeing the humpies of the Aboriginal settlement. Furthermore, Harrison also critiques the scapegoating of Indigenous people for the living conditions imposed upon them through segregationist policies; this is best seen through Gladys’ sarcastic remark “as if we chose to live on a floodplain” (p. 120).

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Explain the theme family.

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The text explores culture-specific understandings of family and contrasts how family is viewed and valued differently across Aboriginal and Anglo-Saxon culture. Whereas for Nan Dear it is shocking that Dolly’s family tree is not expected to include ‘cousins,’ for Anglo-Saxons in the 1950s like Errol, family seems to be a transient unit which one grows up from in order to form their own family, rather than a community which spans across generations. More broadly, family is explored paradoxically as a source of support and entrapment, especially when it becomes clear that wishes and dreams can clash with family expectations and individuals are forced to make difficult choices between themselves and their families. Furthermore, despite family being an unbreakable bond, Harrison does not shy away from critiquing the darker abuses of power (namely between men and women) that continue to plague families from both Aboriginal and white communities.

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Explain the theme dreams.

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Harrison’s play intertwines the dreams and hopes of individual characters with the playwright’s own hopes and dreams for the future of Australia and Indigenous rights. In the microcosm of the family unit, dreams are created, contested, and oftentimes crushed by reality. Gladys’ dream for better Aboriginal housing and her hope to see this realised through the construction of Rumbalara is shattered upon realisation that Rumbalara is not a good enough solution. Dolly’s dreams especially seem to be constantly under threat, whether due to societal barriers or pressures from within her family. It appears that Nan Dear’s cynicism and pessimism, fuelled by past trauma, become a hindrance to the realisation of Dolly’s dreams. This cynicism is treated with empathy by the playwright, yet simultaneously aims to prompt the audience to question how the hopelessness and distrust that comes with generational and personal trauma can prevent progress towards a better future.

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Explain the theme sovereignty.

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Sovereignty also takes the centre stage within the play’s thematic realm. Set in the only commonwealth nation which to this day lacks a formal treaty with its First Nations peoples, Rainbow’s End arguably seems to emphasise continuity rather than change. The play continuously alludes to the bitter irony of Indigenous people being treated like foreigners on their own lands, seen when Gladys objects “I’m not an interloper - I belong here - this is my land!” (p. 120). Through the voice of the radio broadcaster, who proclaims Centennial Park to be the “birthplace of the nation” (p. 15), the playwright exposes the pervasiveness of the myth of terra nullius, the false and racist belief that civilisation in Australia did not exist prior to British colonisation. From the regular inspections the Aboriginal settlement is subjected to, to its eventual bulldozing by the end of the play, it is clear that both the characters and the land are at “the whim of government, at the mercy of Protection Boards, at the vagary of landlords and property owners’’ (p. 48). Gladys’ tautology here perhaps speaks best to the numerous institutions that Harrison condemns as robbing the agency and independence of First Nations peoples.

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Explain the theme gender and sovereignty.

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While we often think of sovereignty as associated with political rights, Harrison also navigates the theme of sovereignty in relation to Indigenous women’s bodies. An intersectional analysis is pertinent as female characters suffer the intersecting consequences of being mistreated both on account of their gender identity and race. Harrison exposes Australian society as governed by misogyny as well as racism, resulting in a culture which produced relentless violence against Indigenous women such as Nan Dear, Ester, and Dolly. In their experiences of abuse, these women are denied autonomy over their own bodies, in two cases by white men. Nonetheless, Harrison elucidates that violence against women can also be indiscriminate, as Dolly is assaulted by her own cousin – in all of these circumstances, the author exhibits the violence of the patriarchy. Even when sexual assault is not present, such as the scene in which Errol grabs Dolly’s arm, the tense stichomythia of their dialogue and the stormy sound design aim to emphasise Dolly’s loss of agency and autonomy as she attempts to wrestle back control. Thus, in exploring intersections of race and gender, Harrison navigates the theme of sovereignty at a personal level, condemning the way it has been denied to Indigenous women.

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Explain the theme innocence and coming of age.

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Given that one of the protagonists (if not the protagonist) is seventeen year old Dolly, we may also consider ‘Rainbow’s End’ to be a coming of age story. One of Dolly’s central struggles is to be treated like a ‘woman,’ and to not have her family (especially Nan Dear) hide matters from her. Towards the end of the play, she wins this privilege yet the stage directions suggest it has come at a cost, the loss of innocence: “DOLLY smiles – she’s finally a woman in NAN’s eyes. But her smile is tinged with sadness” (p. ??) It thus appears that the playwright critiques the way in which the rite of passage into womanhood is associated with pain rather than joy, as the parallels between Dolly and Nan Dear suggest that they represent a common reality.

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What should you always use when talking about authorial intent and verbs?

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Adverbs

Eg.
Before = hits
After = aggressively hits

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List some neutral adverbs.

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Assertively / Adamantly
Authoritatively / Stridently
Bluntly / Definitively
Candidly /Colloquially
Deliberately / Didatically
Graphically / Viscerally
Implicitly / Explicitly
Forcefully / Firmly / Definitively
Humorously /Holistically
Logically / Rationally
Methodically / Moderately
Purposely / Calculatingly
Repeatedly / Respectfully
Systematically /Subtly
Strategically / Tactically
Unequivocally / Openly

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List some negative adverbs.

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Aggressively/ Belligerently
Unapologetically / Scathingly
Bitterly / Blatantly
Bluntly
Contemptuously / Pointedly
Comically/ Callously
Despondently
Disparagingly / Derisively
Defiantly / Caustic
Dispassionately / Defensively
Dogmatically / Provocatively
Satirically / Sarcastically
Sternly (serious)
Urgently
Vigorously (condemns)
Ominously / Forebodingly

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List some positive adverbs.

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Approvingly
Laudatorily
Amiably
Ardently / Fervently
Passionately / Vehemently
Melodramatically / Zealously
Considerately
Compassionately
Earnestly (serious)
Empathetically
Evocatively
Judiciously
Liberally
Optimistically
Sympathetically

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List how it impacts the audience to THINK.

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Consider
Contemplate
Agree/Disagree
Accept
Believe
Understand
Comprehend
Realise
Recognise
Reflect
Reject
Guided to

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List how it impacts the audience to FEEL.

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Elicit
Evoke
Creates
Fuel
Arouse
Incite
Raise (the ire)
engendering
Induces
Generates
Imparts a sense of
Promotes

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List how it impacts the audience to RESPOND.

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Angled
Compelled
Inspired
Encouraged
Galvanised
Spurred / Urged
Provoked / Prompted
Pressured
Inclined / Incited
Reject / Question
Challenge
Support

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List some words to use instead of “show”.

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Accentuate
Amplifies
Characterises
Closely links
Communicates
Connects
Constructs
Conjures
Chronicles
Demonstrates
Displays
Dramtises
Encompasses
Elucidate
Emobidies
Emphasises
Exemplifies
Epitomise
Expresses
Evidenced by…
Gives prominence to
Highlights
Identify
Illuminates
Indicate
Pinpoints
Portrays
Postulates
Presents
Propagate
Propound
Professes
Reiterate
Showcases
Signal / Signifies
Stress
Underscore

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List some words instead of “support”.

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Reinforce
Substantiate
Consolidate
Corroborate
Strengthen
Fortify
Bolster
Build on
Compound

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List some words instead of “use”.

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Presents
Deploys
Implements
Mounts
Employs
Builds
Exploits
Engages an
Proposes
Embraces

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List some words instead of “argues”.

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Contends
Declares
Asserts
Claims
States
Questions
Advocates
Proclaim
Promote

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List some neutral author verbs.

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Asserts
Creates / Conveys
Compells
Describes
Channels / Centres
Elicits / Engender
Emphasises/Establishes
Evokes / Invoke
Explores
Justifies
Illustrates / Invites
Implies / Implores
Italisices
Pinpoints /Portrays
Reasons (against)
Urges

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List some negative author verbs.

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Belittles
Castis (doubt)
Condemns
Criticizes
Denies
Downplays
Diverts (focus)
Trivialize
Obscures
Dramatises
Exposes
Questions
Ridicules / Reveals
Refutes / Rejects
Undermines / Denounces

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List some positive author verbs.

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Advocates
Affirms
Ameliorates
Champions
Commends
Endorses
Clarifies
Pleads
Promotes
Proclaims
Reassures
Sympathizes

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Explain the setting in Rainbow’s End.

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Setting creates a sense of place, so it is important to reflect on how Harrison’s sets reflect or emphasise ideas about land, history and heritage.

  • Rough countryside dwellings are juxtaposed against white, pristine and yet ‘unloveable’ spaces as audiences are invited to temporarily occupy the oppressive places that Indigenous people struggled to make home.
  • A key (and tragic) turning point in Dolly’s life is set against the backdrop of a dramatic, thundering storm, reflecting the characters’ turbulent struggle and loss of innocence.
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Explain the lighting in Rainbow’s End.

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Lighting is also employed strategically throughout, both for dramatic purposes and importantly, to signify the characters’ ‘dream sequences.’

  • The dreamy lighting of the ‘dream’ sequences signifies their distance and detachment from reality - these are hopes that are often unrealisable within the limits of the play and the characters’ societies, yet they bring joy to those who dream them.
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Explain the sound in Rainbow’s End.

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Sound features heavily in the play, both in diegetic and non-diegetic forms. Diegetic sounds such as loud and rough noises, or rain and thunder, intensify scenes of conflict and the inner psychological turmoil of the characters. In contrast, non-diegetic sound such as the use of the song ‘Que sera, sera’ prompts reflection on the thematic aspects of the play, as the lyrics suggest the terrifying yet hopeful notion that the future is uncertain, and that we are not always in control.

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Identify the excerpt and analysis that demonstrates how sound, setting and lighting can all combine to create a powerful narrative effect and climax.

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Stage direction [Dolly]: She wails like a banshee. Rain, thunder, darkness. Time passes. The waters rise. END OF ACT ONE.

  • Use of sound to create animal imagery and portray the attack on Dolly as barbaric and inhumane
  • The setting of the storm and river emphasise and reflect Dolly’s predicament as she feels like she is drowning and powerless.
  • The dark lighting obscures the indecent act from the audience and emphasises the horror of the scene
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Explain character transformation.

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Character Transformation: In the final scene, Gladys takes back her agency – in her father’s absence she takes a stand on the stage to speak about sovereignty, better housing conditions, and an end to segregation. Her “demand” represents the culmination of her transformation from the beginning of the play, where a dream sequence had represented her kneeling gracefully in front of the queen. The speech is also directed at us, the audience, transcending the barriers of time to remind us of the ongoing relevance of Gladys’ words as we watch the performance from lands whose sovereignty have yet to be ceded.

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Explain dialogue.

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Dialogue: Early on, Nan Dear explains that the government “forced [them] to leave Cummeragunja. Our home” (p. 15), alluding to the Soldier Settlement Scheme which forced Aboriginal people to move after their lands were given to returning white soldiers after World War Two. Whilst she later declares that “least here we do things our way” (p. 22), these dialogues suggest that the freedom espoused by this place comes at a cost – the trauma of displacement and the daily struggle of living in a hostile and stigmatised landscape. This is why Gladys clings to the promise of Rumbalara, an Aboriginal housing project in development.

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Explain the symbol of the Hessian fence

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The first is the hessian fence which separates the ‘humpies’ from the main roads during the Queen’s visit. The fence symbolises segregation and a willed blindness to the shameful conditions enforced upon Aboriginal people by white settlers. Gladys refers to it metaphorically as being like “a bandaid over a sore,” suggesting the avoidance of white authorities to address the housing situation.

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Explain the motif of the colour white.

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The colour white is also used symbolically, and white objects such as the gloves that Gladys wears, Dolly’s shoes, the Ajax cleaning agent, skin whitening cream and the white walls of the Rumbalara housing all serve as reminders of white hegemony within Australian society. In other words, whiteness is always presented as superior and desirable, as ‘cleaner’ and more dignified. Harrison symbolically employs these white objects to criticise assimilation policies and attitudes which promoted the idea that Indigenous and non-white people should aspire to be more like white (Anglo-Saxon) people.

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Explain the motif of the encyclopedias.

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Another symbol to consider is the encyclopedias, which represent white epistemologies (ways of knowing). They are written by Anglo-Saxons and contain the body of knowledge accumulated by white people, which is again presented as objectively superior. It is because of this reason that Gladys believes her daughter will be more academically successful if she reads the encyclopedias, as she acknowledges that these are the forms of knowledge valued by white institutions. It may also be said that the encyclopedias are symbolic of Gladys’ dreams to see her daughter achieve an education and succeed in society. Nonetheless, through Nan Dear’s ironic comment “Encyclops boy and he knows nothing!” (p. 55) Harrison challenges the superiority of white epistemologies and exposes how Indigenous knowledge (especially of the land) has been undervalued and ignored.

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Explain the meaning behind the name “Rainbow’s End”.

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The title refers to the characters’ hope for a better future, symbolizing the possibilities and aspirations that lie ahead despite the challenges they face.

If you say that something is at the end of the rainbow, you mean that people want it but it is almost impossible to obtain or achieve. The promise of a cure–the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow–often makes sensible people do irrational things.

  • Could connect to the Rumbalara housing that was promised to be the “end of the rainbow” yet it didn’t “solve” anything. Potentially expressing that this endeavour for this amazing cure was merely a facade.
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Explain the bulldozers.

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In “Rainbow’s End,” the bulldozers symbolise the forceful imposition of government policies on the lives of Aboriginal people and the erasure of their traditional ways of living.

The sound of bulldozers marks a moment of transformation and loss for the family as they watch their home, the humpy, disappear — a manifestation of intrusive governmental intervention that disregards the significance of the humpy as a cultural and historical sanctuary for the characters: “From riverbank humpy to white house is quite a step. It will shortly become reality for the Aboriginal residents of the tin and canvas shanties”. This illustrates the government initiative to ‘solve’ Aboriginal housing, though it’s deeply conflicting for the characters who are being uprooted from their ancestral connection to the land.

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How will you be assessed in Section C ?

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Section C will be assessed against the following criteria:

  • Understanding of contention, argument(s), and point of view
  • Analysis of the ways in which written and spoken lanquage and visuals are used to present an arguments) and to persuade an intended audience
  • Use of evidence from the text to support the analysis
  • Use of fluent expression through appropriate use of vocabulary and conventions of Standard Australian English
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How will you be assessed in Section A ?

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Section A will be assessed against the following criteria:

  • dge and understanding of the text, its structure, and the ideas, concerns and values it explores
  • Development of a coherent analysis in response to the topic
  • Use of evidence from the text to support the analysis
  • Use of fluent expression through appropriate use of vocabulary and conventions of Standard Australian English
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How will you be assessed in Section B ?

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Section B will be assessed against the following criteria:

  • Use of relevant idea(s) drawn from one Framework of Ideas, the title provided and at least one piece of stimulus material
  • Creation of a cohesive text that connects to a clear purposes) and incorporates an appropriate voice
  • Use of suitable text structure(s) and language features to create a text
  • Use of fluent expression, including the appropriate use of vocabulary

NOTE: use multiple stimulus’, varied structure, clear voice, clear purpose, and sensory language.

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What do you need to include in the section c essay?

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  1. Use the background information to help you with the basics.
  2. What is the context of the issue? What are its broader implications? For example is this about free speech, environmental concerns, economic concerns, etc?
  3. Who is the author/speaker? What stake do they have in the issue? Any credentials/expertise to consider?
  4. Who is the audience/s? Are they specifically targeted to think something? Do something? Change something?
  5. How are the different stakeholders being characterised? How is this shaping argument?
  6. What are the arguments? What is their sequence and how is this structured in a logical way? Logical in that it is more persuasive.
  7. What SPECIFIC types of language is being used? ‘Zoom in’ to find some key uses of language; think about appeals, connotations, emotive language, etc.
  8. Are there visuals? How are they connecting to the written text/argument? What specific elements can you see in the visual to draw upon to analyse?
  9. What are the tone/s of the piece? Where are the tonal shifts? What arguments are they connected to?
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Outline the structure for section C.

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Intro
B1 = 3 pieces of evidence analysis (1 persuasive technique and 3 visual analysis if there is a visual)
B2 = 3 pieces of evidence analysis (1 persuasive technique and 3 visual analysis if there is a visual)
B3 = 3 pieces of evidence analysis (1 persuasive technique and 3 visual analysis if there is a visual)
Conclusion

Aim for 4-5 pages (intro and conclusion short but each body paragraph 1 page)

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Outline the structure for section A.

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Intro
B1 = 3 evidence analysis points
B2 = 3 evidence analysis points
B3 = 3 evidence analysis points
Conclusion

Aim for 4-5 pages (intro and conclusion short but each body paragraph 1 page)

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Outline the structure for section B.

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Aim for 4-5 pages in length and consistently connect to the stimulus at least once in each paragraph.

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Sample section b?

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  1. 8AM Text (really doing this?)
  2. EVENING Dare - firm windows - pristine blouse - shadows eyes
  3. 4th year Greystone & Co - on paper everything she wanted yet reality eroded them into fragments of frustration
  4. Males get promotions - ideas dismissed praised when repeated - “be patient” “wait your turn”
  5. Tonight firm’s annual dinner - exclusivity real decisions - “men’s business” - as if careers were pieces on a chess board they alone could move - men laughed it off she knew the stakes
  6. 7PM Abrupt buzz - be careful you deserve to be there but they don’t have the greatest track record for caring - not doing anything i don’t deserve yes i will be careful
  7. Earlier that day invitation colleague’s desk - shimmer felt like a challenge - she wasn’t invited but what if she went anyway - she’s not waiting any longer.
  8. Walking into the dinning hall - scent of lillies and polished mahogany - conversations quieted, curious eyes turning her way - but she held her ground.
  9. Managing partner caught sight of her momentarily stunned - his brows knitted but eyes softened (slightly) - cool smile made her way to empty seat - felt every whisper - she was here for her own reasons.
  10. Evening carried on flow of chatter - not here to observe - interjecting her insights with calm confidence, smoothness of her voice cutting through any disbelief.
  11. Managing partner addressed her directly she felt a rush of triumph - she engaged knowing each word was a reminder of her right to be there - feel the shift subtle but undeniable like a door being pried open inch by inch.
  12. EPILOGUE Evening wound down made way to the exit - clasped shoulder turning to meet MP eyes - “Rosetta” he began mixture of reproach and something else smth like respect - “its not usually… proper what you did tonight” - lifting chin let moment pass “and why is that? I’m as much a part of this firm as anyone else here”
  13. His gaze held hers - slight nod - didn’t say she knew - shed opened a door maybe not fully but enough for the light to seep through - heels clicked confidently stepped cool night air - no applause, no declaration of victory but a quiet smile curved her lips - glanced back at the windows the shadows of the men inside reminded her of what she defied tonight.
  14. 10PM E (how it go) R (worth it, wont change everything but its a start)
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How to end section b if there isn’t enough time?

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“She knew there was more to do—much more. But tonight, she’d rest, knowing she’d already begun.”