Common mistake

Question 1

Thiếu ý

Answer 1

k tl đủ câu hỏi đề

Question 2

Developments in technology have bought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simple lives to solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Answer 2

Nói về cả 2 phe
đưa ra nhận định theo phe nào cả 2, 1 hay k?
=>
MB: While many people think that environmental problems can be solved by technology, I believe that it is our responsibility to lead a simpler lifestyle to tackle this issue.

Question 3

Studies show that criminals get low level of education. Some people believe that the best way to reduce the crime is educating people in the prison so they can be get a job after leaving prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Answer 3

hỏi mình: nên mình phải ngĩ nên k được viết là người khác ngĩ như
while it is widely accepted that…, many people believe that => k biết đâu là quan điểm người viết
=>
I believe that

đưa ra luật chặt chẽ= giáo dục trẻ vị thành nien + giảm tỉ lệ phim ảnh bạo lực

MB: Although I accept that education for prisoners is an excellent way to reduce crime rates, I believe that it is by no means the single best way.

Question 4

Thừa

Answer 4

trả lời thừa, nói về background

Question 5

Studies show that criminals get low level of education.

Developments in technology have bought various environmental problems.

Answer 5

Câu này là background là sự thẩ hiển nhiên k phải câu chủ để nên k được trả lời đồng ý hay k đồng ý.

Question 6

Scientist agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Other think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Answer 6

chủ thể là education

2 phe đồng ý hay k

Question 7

Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?

Answer 7

a

Question 8

Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities.
Scientist agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food.

Answer 8

câu background nên k được dành cả đoạn để viết nhưng cần được nhắc lại trong bài.

Question 9

Lệch

Answer 9

viết về 2 quan điểm trong bài không cân xứng về độ dài

Question 10

Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or spots personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Answer 10

độ dài vè 2 đoạn theo ví dụ k cân xứng

Question 11

Lạc đề

Answer 11

câu không đóng góp j cho chủ đề của mình

hoặc bài nói không đúng chủ đề.

Question 12

Popular events ike the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Answer 12

viết hẳn về chủ đề khác

Question 13

Lòng vòng

Answer 13

k đi thẳng vào vấn đề

Question 14

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Answer 14

viết quá lòng vòng để diễn đạt 1 vấn đề

Question 15

Dài dòng

Answer 15

viết nhiều lan man nhưng k tập trung vào ý chính hoặc mất qá nhiều câu để diễn đạt ý

Question 16

Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Answer 16

a

Question 17

Rời rạc

Answer 17

thiếu từ nối, k có sự liên kết với các câu ở trước. k có minh chứng cho ý chính.

Question 18

Ríu rít

Answer 18

k có dấu câu

Question 19

Vơ đũa cả nắm

Answer 19

thường diễn đạt opinion nhưng bài viết cần tính chính xác

Question 20

if people have children late in their life, their children will have lot of disease.

Answer 20

a

Question 21

All children who eat fast food will become overweight in one weel

Answer 21

một số có khả năng

Question 22

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school os the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Answer 22

k dùng linking word nhưng dùng nhiều từ liên quan trong 1 chủ đề dang muốn nói tới trong đoạn.
However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society CANNOT BE ACHIEVED JUST IN THE HOME. Once a child goes to SCHOOL, they are entering a wider community where TEACHERS AND PEERS will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. AT SCHOOL, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. THIS EXPERIENCE should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community. But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill.

Question 23

Rush

Answer 23

đọc đề qua loa, lỗi task response

Question 24

New words

Answer 24

k biết nên đoán dựa vào ngữ cảnh

Question 25

Not sure about the meaning

Answer 25

biết nghĩa cơ bản đặt vào ngữ cảnh để có nghĩa chính xác

Question 26

Misunderstanding the task

Answer 26

hiểu nhầm câu hỏi giữa discuss and agree/disagree

Question 27

Understanding… the question or questions?

Answer 27

đề có mấy câu hỏi? có 2 k đc tl 1

hỏi j tl trực tiếp trong đề bài

Question 28

Forgot to highlight keywords

Answer 28

cần thiết để không lạc đề