COMMENTARY

Question 1

Order of paragraphs?

Answer 1

1. Introduction
2. Structure/mode
3. Register
4. Style and tone

Question 2

What does para 1 involve?

Answer 2

Introduction:
CAMP
- Keep it simple and short.

Question 3

What does para 2 involve?

Answer 3

Mode - How did you make your adaptation suitable for the mode of the text? - specific features used for this type of text?

Layout - How did you make the layout/graphology/paragraphing suitable for the genre/reader/listener/audience.

• Don’t spend too long on this, not that important!

Question 4

What does para 3 involve?

Answer 4

Register and tone - Effects of lexis and grammar choices appropriate to the genre/audience/purpose? (high/low frequency, latinate/germanic, emotive lang. etc)

Question 5

What does para 4 involve?

Answer 5

Stylistic featues - specific to genre (rhetorical devices, figurative lang - metaphors, similies)

Semantics - semantic field used, why?

Tone/message - overall tone, message promoted?