Characterisation Flashcards
“Cigarette smoke and thick sweet cologne.”
-overpowering smell of Rasheed reps his overpowering nature
“Thick bellied and broad shouldered, stopping in the doorway…slow heavy footed movement across the room.”
-description makes him seem large emphasises his overpowering nature and creating a feeling of discomfort
“His harsh, raspy voice reminded Mariam of the sound of dry autumn leaves crushed underfoot”
-sensory language, harsh and discomforting
“The hooked nose, flushed cheeks that gave the impression of sly cheerfulness, the watery bloodshot eyes.”
-unattractive repulsive description creates a discomfort in the reader, emphasising Mariams own discomfort
Mammy, ferocious, indomitable, pacing and ranting: Babi sitting looking sheepish and dazed nodding obediently , waiting for the storm to pass.
Characterisation of mammy and Babi swaps traditional gender roles
“His hair had gone white but it was as thick and coarse as ever. There was a sag now to his eyes and the skin of his beck which was wrinkled and leathery. But he still had the thick torso, the strong hands, the swollen belly.”
-description is uncomfortable
And negative “thick” “coarse” “leathery” - sensory language that created an uncomfortable feeling for the reader
“His touch felt like wearing a prickly old wet wool sweater with no undershirt”
- simile and use of sensory language depicts the uncomfortable feeling Rasheed brings