Bright star! Would I were stedfast as thou art Flashcards
Form
Shakespearian sonnet form
“Bright star, would I were stedfast as thou art”
“Bright star” - Poetic apostrophe, addressing the star
- Speaker desires the eternal properties that the star has, but doesn’t desire the other factors that accompany the star
“Not in the lone splendour hung aloft the night”
“Splendour” - beauty of the star
BUT
- Keats rejects the isolated nature of the star
“Watching, with eternal lids apart”
- Personification of the star, emphasising its lack of humanity
- The star is presented as unblinking/ unresting
“Like nature’s patient, sleepless Eremite,
“Eremite” - religious hermite, isolation
- Keats portrays the isolation in spirituality as undesirable
- Highlights the vast amount of time passing, “patient” “sleepless”
Simile and personification
“Watching (…) the moving waters at their priestlike task or pure ablution round earth’s human shores”
- Holy nature of Earth
- Idyllic portrayal of nature
- Personification of water doing a “pristine task” - an image of eternity and transience, “moving”
“Gazing on the (…) snow upon the mountains and the moors”
- Contrast between the heat and warmth of humanity and the cold nature of snow, space and eternity
“Pillow’d upon my fear love’s ripening breast”
- Evokes feelings of warmth, intimacy and comfort
- Contrasts against the cold image of snow
“To feel for ever its soft swell and fall”
- Tactile imagery
- Mimics the breathing of the woman
“Awake for ever in a sweet unrest”
- Keats wishes to stay with his lover for eternity
“Sweet unrest” - oxymoron - Keats wants to remain awake to be close to his loved one, highlights the intimate moment
- Parallel between the speaker and the star
“Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath”
- Repetition and alliteration - emphasis, yearning and longing
“hear” - auditory description
“And so live ever - or else swoon to death”
“And so live ever”
- Idea of human love being so special it can be eternal
“-“ caesura
“Or else swoon to death”
- Preference of death due to his overwhelming love
- Paradoxical ending, negative capabilities
Biographical context
- Thought to be written for Fanny Brawne
- Thought to be written on his way to Rome, aware of his mortality