before you were mine Flashcards
poetic voice
Poetic voice is sentimental and reflective, often nostalgic and sometimes wistful and humorous
“Marilyn”
Fragmented sentence- link to Marilyn Monroe, icon, idolises her
PV: affection
“The decade ahead of my loud, possessive yell was the best one, eh?”
VOLTA- shifts to mothers adulthood when speaker is present, freedom is over
PV: sarcastic, humorous, wistful
“My hands” “your ghost”
Contrasting noun phrases- ‘my hands’ past with mother, ‘your ghost’ present when mother passed
PV: sentimental, reflective
“The decade ahead of my loud, possessive yell was the best one, eh?”
“And whose small bites on your neck, sweetheart?”
Rhetorical questions- conversational, represents how they would have spoken to each other
PV: patronising, reversal in roles, humorous
“Cha, cha, cha!”
“The steps” “waltz”
Semantic field of dance- fun relationship with each other, highlights mothers youth
PV: romanticising, nostalgic, fun
“Sparkle and waltz and laugh”
Syndetic list of verbs- her mother was fun to be around
PV: reflective, reminiscing joy