Because I Could Not Stop for Death Flashcards
Because I Could Not Stop For Death
Emily Dickinson
Published posthumously
Emily Dickinson
1830-1886, Suffered from ill-health and depression
Spent much of adult life caring for her chronically ill mother, wrote poetry in secret
Consistant themes of the ‘deepening menace’ of death, then immortality, one followed on by the other without the intervention of guilt
Praised for use of structure and syntax, punctuation, unconventional capitalisation and lineation
Form and structure
Ballad stanza
Alternating tetrameter and tri-meter
Rhyming second and fourth lines in quatrains
This is a melodic form seen in gyms and folk songs
Most of Dickinson’s poems fit with the tune of The Yellow Rose of Texas
Themes
Death
Immortality
Eternity/Time
Immortality
Immortality is employed ironically, not to suggest everlasting life, but everlasting death
Death
33 of Dickinson’s acquaintances die between 1851-1854
Personified
Attempts to visualise a fearlessness for death, devoid of the ubiquitous grim-reaper
Capitalisation
Use of personal pronoun
Eternity/Time
Life is short and Death is long - Never ending
Viewed from eternity as a fond memory
Speaker
Deceased speaker used to recount the memory of the journey from life, beyond death and on to eternity
Opening:
Because I could not stop for death
The subordinating conjunction ‘Because’ provides an idea of being interrupted
Provides an explanation
‘I could not stop for death’
“Slowly drove”
Internal rhyming
followed by insistent dash
Punctuation, Lexis and sound to replicate time passing
Open vowel sounds literally slow the speaker down
Idiosyncratic use of dashes
Initially they serve to cause the reader an idea of the interruption
However they are also used to make small corrections
“Just ourselves - And immortality”
“We passed..
…
We passed”
Anaphora carries the reader forward, whilst simultaneously causing us to look back
The carriage occupants are not merely passing a motley collection of scenes, they are passing out of life—reaching the high afternoon of life, or maturity.
Stanza 3
Where the journey starts to become difficult
This is highlighted by change in rhythm
Conflict in the lines and shift of tone
“Children strove”
Children struggling vigorously are ignorant to the surmise of death
“Children strove” –> “Fields of Grazing Grain”
Contrast
Grain represents maturity
There is intimation of harvest and perhaps, in its gaze, nature’s indifference to a universal process