Bayonet Charge Flashcards
“Dazzled”
Confused the soldier
“Green hedge”
- the focus of the running soldier
- sees it as a beacon of hope from all of his misery
“Like a man who has jumped up in the dark and runs”
Simile
Shows how determined/ eager the soldier is to get away
“Threw up a yellow hare”
- Shows that the conflict has disrupted nature
- The hare has been thrown into the vicious circle
- The hare could also be a metaphor for the young soldiers who are just thrown into battle
Ends with:
“His terror’s touchy dynamite”
The soldier feels like he’s going to explode with fear due to the reality, effects and futility of war.
“King, honour, human dignity, etcetera”
- Listing
- Things that seemed important to the soldier before war now seem futile when faced with death.
- The pointlessness of these things is reinforced through the choice of the word “etcetera”
“The shot-slashed furrows/ Threw up a yellow hare that rolled like a flame… its mouth wide/ Open silent, its eyes standing out.”
- Gruesome image
- highlights the brutality of war
“Suddenly he awoke and was running”
The poem begins in media’s res- this creates a sense of urgency and highlights the chaos of war.
“Stumbling across a field of clods towards a green hedge/ That dazzled with rifle fire”
The verb “ stumbling” indicates his lack of control as he is caught up in the chaos of war.
“He lugged a rifle numb as a smashed arm”
- Simile
- The image suggests the rifle is useless and therefore emphasises how vulnerable he is.
- It could also foreshadow the injuries he might gain because of war.
“The patriotic tear that had brimmed in his eye/ Sweating like molten iron from the centre of this chest.”
- Simile
- The soldier’s patriotic ideals are useless now he is faced with the reality of conflict.
- The contrast betweened “brimmed”, with its positive connotations of abundance and pride, and “sweating” highlights this contrast.
- Comparing the tears to iron dehumanises the soldier and likens him to something mechanical
“In what cold clockwork of the stars…”
- harsh alliteration
- potentially a reference to fate governing the soldier and his powerlessness
“Bullets smacking the belly out of the air”
- highlights the danger of the battlefield