Bayonet Charge Flashcards
‘Was he the hand pointing that second?’
employs a caesura in stanza 2 forcing the reader to stop and think just like the soldier almost stopped to think.
‘running - raw/ In raw-seamed hot khaki’
.shows difficulty in expressing the moment
.the repetition reflects the shock the soldier has, experiencing this sudden charge.
‘Bullets smacking the belly of the air’
.Effect of war on nature
.shows the ‘air’ is also a victim of war but is unhinged.
‘a yellow hare’
.another reference to nature
.Hughes love for animals
.yellow could link to cowardice
‘in what cold clockwork of the stars and the nations’
.Hughes passion for astrology
.’nations’ - government
.destined by the stars
.’cold clockwork’ indicates the soldier’s likeness to a cog and that no one cares what happens to him.
‘the patriotic tear’
.original patriotism pushed aside for sheer panic
.emotive language makes reader emotional