AUNT JULIA - annotated Flashcards
Aunt Julia
structure - poem begins with direct reference to aunt-
emphasises her importance to poet.
very loud and very fast.
repetition - conveys her determined forceful character
word choice - conveys dominance of Julia’s personality. Both reflect confidence.
I could not answer her —
I could not understand her.
repetition - conveys his inability to communicate with his aunt.
word choice - develops why he could not communicate with her. Both verbally and in life?
She
structure - 2nd stanza again begins with direct reference to AJ - again emphasising her importance.
wore men’s boots
word choice - suggests she is strong and practical
character - doesn’t care for appearances and
capable of doing tasks normally done by males
when she wore any
suggests strength of character as she is often barefooted
strong foot,
going barefoot outside links her with world of
nature.
stained with peat,
word choice - links AJ with traditional, natural environment of the island. she is hardy.
paddling with the treadle of the
long sentence and onomatopoeia - reflects length of time spinning process takes and the sound made
spinningwheel
word choice - again connects AJ with skill traditional to
island life. harris associated with tweed.
her right hand drew yarn
elongated vowel sounds - lengthens line and reflects wool being stretched.
marvellously
word choice - connotations of something impressive, a spectacle - magical quality to her skill
out of the air.
word choice - suggests impossibility, magic - poet impressed by AJ’s ability
the only house
word choice - emphasises the bond they have and how special it was to visit AJ.
absolute darkness
word choice - connotations of intensity, total darkness, something which would normally be scary but poet isn’t scared
box bed,
alliteration - conveys idea of it being a strange location - being surrounded, content, security
crickets being friendly.
word choice - childlike language, importance of natural world - sounds like a tale told by an adult -
removes fear from the situation - surrounded by warm, friendly nature
She was buckets and water flouncing into them.
metaphor - highlights that she had no running water, simple life but worked through it, ‘flouncing’
suggests her energy, vitality
‘flouncing’ - transferred epithet - gives a
description of the deliberate,
vigorous way she moved.
She was winds pouring wetly round house-ends.
imagery and alliteration - highlights the wild weather of Scotland which MacCaig experienced when there with her. links her to landscape. Also emphasises her fluid quality but also strong fluid nature.
She was brown eggs,
metaphor - highlights her simple life of her croft
producing the food she ate
black skirts
Word choice - connotations of
simplicity, plain - AJ was practical in
her clothes, knows they may get dirty.
keeper of threepennybits in a teapot.
alliteration - shows her to be thrifty, careful with money. poet remembers little quirks that form the image of her in his memory.
Aunt Julia spoke Gaelic
repetition of opening line - introduces his desire to learn Gaelic and the fact he only managed after she’d died. pathos/irony of situation.
very loud and very fast.
contrasts between AJ and him - ‘very loud/fast” and ‘learned little’ shows her strength, energy and
purpose with his ineffective efforts.