A Song - Poetry Flashcards
name two motifs in ‘Bright Star’
Wealth/lack of it
Water/sea/tears
set in the technique of
a ballad - as it is a story
Motif of riches
‘Scanty store’
‘Boon’ of his heart
‘Gave’ ‘valued’ (the boon) - double meaning of value
‘His generous worth’ - double meaning, he is not wealthy but his soul is worth a lot
Equates his love with wealth
‘In search of gain’
‘Riches to obtain’
‘When love is all I prize?’
‘frugal meal’ - simple/plain
‘The lowly cot’ - links to lowly status
‘That simple fare, that humble lot, were more than wealth to me’
emotive language example
‘Bliss on Earth’
Hyperbolic language
‘If blest my love with thee!’
Sibilance is used because…
E.g. ‘soul sincere’
Melancholic ‘s’ sound
Wealth motif: (part 2)
- frugal meal- simple/plain
- the lowly cot- links to lowly status
Water motif
- my tears but vainly flow
- ‘faithless waves’
- ‘pour my woe’
- ‘dark, deep’ (night and water)
- ‘the storm is in my soul’
State the layout/overall structure of the play:
- four lines per stanza
- ABAB rythme scheme
- iambic trimeter
- punctuation heavy
—-> very regular and simplistic structure
How does the tone/mood change?
Tone begins as positive towards lover; ends lonely and dark in final paragraph
Overall is melancholy
STANZA V analysis
While he the dangerous ocean braves,
My tears but vainly flow;
Is pity in the faithless waves
To which I pour my woe?
- negative; tone change (positive love —-> sad, yearning)
‘Vainly flow’ - powerless, she cannot change what will happen
‘Faithless’ - adjective; waves are personified - the partner will not be able to fulfill his promise to her if he dies, connotations of a faithless partner
Figurative speech/metaphor - ‘pour my woe’ - idea that the waves are endless/comparing the sadness to the width of the ocean (endless sadness)
Language techniques:
Sibilance, constant rhythming, caesuras, some enjambment
STANZA VI
the night is dark, the waters deep
Yet soft the billows roll,
Alas! At every breeze I weep-
The storm is in my soul
Compares/parallels the images of her sorrow and his plight
- —-> water motif
——> ‘The night is dark’ uses pathetic fallacy
‘The waters deep’ and ‘At every breeze I weep’ - rhyme
‘The storm is in my soul’ - even when the sea is quiet, her feelings are agitated
= semantic field; words in the same family of meanings
Has an edge of finality in the last line without fulfilment: the feelings are ongoing but the last stanza depicts no happy resolution.
Key things to remember:
- poverty contrast to wealth (semantic field of each) -> linked to love
- the sea is presented as dangerous, endless and unpredictable used as a metaphor for her emotions and her love (‘the storm is in my soul’)