1. Eat Me - Patience Agbabi Flashcards
Summary
Woman is forcefed by her partner for his sexual satisfaction. She initially finds happiness in his investment for her, until stanza 7 which marks a change in tone as she comes to terms with the reality of her entrapment. Morbid ending - she sufforcates him to death.
Structure
- Brevity of verses: Presents series of vignettes
- Rhyme: Heightens sense of entrapment
- Language: Enacts movements + contours of body
- Dramatic monologue
- Tercets changing length: Breaking free
- Regular structure: Routine
‘they said ‘Eat Me’. And I ate. Did
What I was told. Didn’t even taste it.’
- Alice in Wonderland: Infantilisation, trapped in a world controlled by outsider
- Biblical register of syntax ‘and I ate’: Omnipotent power, ‘His’ 3rd person possessive pronoun
- ‘Did what I was told’: Infantilises her, dominant parent/child relationship
- Ambiguity of cake/sexual act: Power and submission imagery
- Physical fullness/emotional emptiness
‘He asked me to get up and walk round the bed so he could watch my broad belly wobble, hips judder like a juggernaut’
- ‘So he could watch’: Personal satisfaction, objectifying, male gaze, voyeur
- ‘Broad/belly’ and ‘judder/juggernaut’: Onomatopoeic, alliteration alludes to wobbling = jelly (Infantilisation)
- ‘He’: Lack of identity, only ‘he’ and ‘I’, no one outside their morbid world vs. no togetherness
- ‘Broad/juggernaut’: Half-rhyme - uncomfortable movement
‘I was his Jacuzzi. But he was my cook, my only pleasure the rush of fast food, his pleasure, to watch me swell like forbidden fruit’
- ‘Jacuzzi’: water being tamed for pleasure. Seems comfortable until he drowns in her flesh.
- Caesura ‘but’: Justifies her vested interest, pause, mutualistic relationship
- ‘Rush’: Addiction
- ‘his pleasure’: Line below/non-caring
- ‘Forbidden fruit’ Garden of Eden: Alludes to paradise yet dominion
‘I was a tidal wave of flesh’
‘I allowed him’
- Evident shift in power/ shift in subject
- No longer centred on ‘he’ but ‘I’: Speaker now concedes to access her body
- Control: Beginning to backfire, tidal wave prefigures speakers eventual actions
‘And how/
could I not roll over on top. Rolled and he drowned
in my flesh. I drowned his dying sentence out’.
‘Nothing left in the house to eat’
- ‘How could I not roll over on top’: Metaphor for fighting back vs. Erotic vs. Rage. Enjambment enacts process of rolling over.
- Horror of murder undermined by morally compromising nature of relationship
- Final stanza: Epilogue
- Reveals poets sense of humour: Feeder gets the ultimate comeuppance
- Reccurent water imagery: He is now a fish out of water, drowning, removes his ability to speak, seeking power
Themes, Attitudes & Values
- Intrapersonal/wider relationships
- Post-colonial: Exoticism ‘forbidden fruit’ - speaker subverts to becoming a ‘tidal wave’ that engulfs and subsumes him.
- Alliteation and assonace: Sensory description of body - tongue-in-cheek critique of Western consumerism.
Comparison to ‘The Gun’
- Life’s taboos: Death, Sex, Addiction, Excess
* Death & loss: Foreboding build up to death, control gained from death and loss, effect of death
Comparison to ‘Giuseppe’
Ambiguous Relationships
- Ambiguous sense of who the criminal is
- Ambiguous response to death
- Ambiguous involvement of speaker in relationship (Eat Me (Lovers? Relationship pre-existing - Giuseppe, sidelined, relationship marked by action.)